AD+adverting

=AD adverting (rough draft) by Ricardo Hedman=

Advertisement is a very controversial yet justifiable topic. ** In order to have an idea of what advertisement is we should start with its definition. DONT SAY WHAT TOY'RE GOING TO SAY, JUST SAY IT, IT ONLY WORK FOR SPEECHES. ** An advertisement is a form of communication intended to persuade an audience to take some action. ** Knowing what it is we can tell that it can be able to influence us in many ways, but especially in two ways in a good and a bad way. ** **STATE THE WAYS HOW ADVERTISEMENT AFFECTS US IN MANY WAYS.** Another arguing point is that advertisement has an exceeding limit into where it advertises and this can be a problem for children. **Advertisement is a way of life we have learned to live with in our daily basis. HOW COME? BACK IT UP WITH SOME RESEARCH. **

There are certain benefits in advertising for our lives. Freedom of speech is one of the rights that most people have around the world. Advertisements are used to express ways of how people feel. “Yo quiero Taco Bell” (Taco Bell, 1997). This was an ad by Taco Bell that meant “I want Taco Bell” and it shows us how through these **little sayings ( WORD CHOICE) ** people do define what they really want. With ads you can also experience different feelings or at least it gives you the idea of how you should feel toward the product or the idea that’s being advertised. Coca Cola had an ad that said “Open happiness” (Coca Cola, 2009), and its ads included people with smiles on their faces and how it showed that it felt good to open a Coca Cola. **MENTION ALSO HOW OPEN HAPPINESS IS NOT ONLY BY THEIR SMILES BUT ALSO THE ENVIRONMENT PLAYS A VERY IMPORTANT ROLE IN HOW IT INFLUENCES US.**


 * Sometimes advertisement can get out of hand, in means of it exceeds the limits**. ** SAY WHAT YOU NEED TO SAY, EITHER USE A COLLOQUIAL LANGUAGE OR NOT. **There are techniques in advertising that makes a person want to consume a specific product or service, an example would be “Do you Yahoo?” (Yahoo), which makes people want to use Yahoo since it’s a way of looking at your emails, sending emails, ** etc. DONT USE ETC, USE "AND MORE" OR SIMPLY END YOUR SENTENCE AFTER "SENDING EMAILS." ** This happens exclusively with beauty products like cosmetics which **ensure s ** that people will look beautiful. Most of the time advertisements are about the context, something ** (WORD CHOICE) ** that is catchy that will make you eventually buy it. There was an advertisement by the **Budweiser COMPANY** in which it included the phrase “wassup” and it’s a **SHORT** catchy phrase that reminded you about the beer. **Having APPROPRIATE AND JUVENILE wording HELPS TRANSMIT what A COMPANY IS TRYING TO OFFER; THESE ARE SOME OF MANY techniques that help advertisements promote what they want.** Through this way it’s easier for people to know about products and services that they might need.

There are certain products that enter in debate for whether they should be advertised or whether they
 * SHOULD NOT,(WHEN WRITING A FORMAL ESSAY DO NOT ABBREVIATE OR USE CONTRACTIONS). **There are certain advertisements that we might need but **it is** dangerous to advertise, this would be the case of guns. People want to be safe and they buy guns for this purpose. This is **very risky (WORD CHOICE)** advertising since people that **ARE NOT** capable of using them or children might get knowledge of these products. Industries that manufacture these types of products do have to have a way of selling these things to **THE POPULATION.** People have the right to know that there are different alcoholic drinks available. There are products that **ARE DESIRED BY THE POPULATION, YET ADVERTISING AGENCIES MUST** be careful **OF** how you transmit it to the audience.


 * John Kenneth Galbraith, A 21ST CENTURY ECONOMIST** argues that advertising is morally wrong because it enables corporations to artificially create the desire to possess the goods or services it offers for sale (Flaherty, 2003). There is also said that advertisement for children is wrong and shouldn’t be done. Not all the products should be advertised. People are lied to and lie all the time and either way it is used to manipulate people. Children also have the right to learn about things in the world but there should be certain precaution for this matter. You **do NOT** want to promote sex **YET THERE ARE STRATEGIES IN WHICH CAN BE** promote it through making it safety. The advertising of condoms even though it justifies people to do it they might do it the safe way.

Thanks to advertisement we are able to learn about products and services that are need for life to go in a nice and easy way. Though we can sometimes over charge ourselves for wanting things that we know we can’t have, there are always ads that make you have a good time and a good feeling. Limits are made to be broken and a good example would be advertising, it is very difficult to contain advertising to a small audience.


 * TRY TO MAKE A BETTER CONCLUSION, RESTATING YOUR THESIS USING INFORMATION FROM DIFFERENT SOURCES THAT GIVES THE READER ENOUGH INFORMATION TO UNDERSTAND WHAT YOU ARE TRYING TO CONVEY. **

Reference:

Crash (2007) "Top 80 Advertising Slogans/Catch Phrases" retrieved March 12, 2010 from []

Flaherty, P.(2003) "Philosophy: Questions & Theories" Toronto, Ontario: McGraw-Hill Ryerson Limited.

The Coca-Cola Company (2009) "Open Happiness Press Release" retrieved March 12, 2010 from []

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 * YOUR ESSAY IS GOOD, YET IT LACKS RESEARCH AND ENOUGH EVIDENCE FOR A READER TO LEARN SOMETHING NEW. I LIKE IT YET YOU HAD MANY GRAMMATICAL ERRORS. YOUR THESIS SHOULD BE BETTER STATED "Advertisement is a way of life we have learned to live with in our daily basis."