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1268786317 What an excellent essay. I am really impress how you were able to avoid being bias. Its really interesting reading your essay specially knowing how different philosophersview the situation. As a sudgestion, you should search for St. Thomas Aquinas, in order to use it as a counter argument. Another thing you could do is look for a philospher in Ch 13 that states that religion should not dictate people's lives. You should also talk about Butt's and a guy in the early Ch that argue whether humans are born good or evil. For the APA citation you should use Son of Citation to save some time...

Eun Young: Thank you for your wonderful peer evaluation. I will look for St. Thomas Aquinas and Butt. Thank you very much for your advice! :)

Nice essay! It's neatly written .... But!!! I think you should link your essay to the rough draft page.... Check your edline if you have a grade for your rough draft! " [|**TeachPhilosophy**] Why'd I get a zero? 6 people haven't added a ruff draft to the wiki, or they didn't link it on the rough draft page! Can't grade u w/o that!"(from Mr.Schult's twitter) Go to the left and look for "Rough Draft" page and link it, the instructions are there... 1268790916

I think that you did a good job, like Pablo said, at avoiding being biased. I also believe that you could shorten your thesis to a more compact state, remember that sometimes a few words say more than enough. You could also improve on your sentence fluency to make the reader feel like he goes from one subject to the next without any bumps along the road. Overall though, your essay was very clean and to the point without much superflous material. 1268799468